Telling a Tale.
short, crisp and effective. :) This scene is quite common and u've depicted reality. 'That gram of weight' caught my attention. Elaborate?
:) Thank you.A gram of weight? It's a phrase I use - to describe incessant sorrow that is buried within - always carried about, like a gram of weight - the weight of sorrow.
It reminds me of an airport scene I have described in my blog recently....
Lovely. I like your 'gram of weight' theory, though I think it might not always be sorrow, it might just be that inexplicable, inherent heaviness that one can't get rid of.